Essay talk:Is religion tied to civilization?

I find this essay very long and difficult to read--my attention tends to wane somewhere around the part about "revising." Do you think you can tighten it up a bit? Ed Poor. 18:40, 3 November 2008 (EST)

Already picked apart, and I was only making it as an idea to remind myself! I wish there was a way to write it and then maybe, perhaps, upload it. But this isn't picasa. Why don't you delete it until I actually start thinking. --lol, wut?! 18:44, 3 November 2008 (EST)