Essay:My personal criticism of Christianity

The Short Overview Of Christianity
Christianity is an Abrahamic religion based on the idea of Jesus Christ as the savior of all the sinful on earth. The Holy Book from where Christians draw their inspiration is called the Bible. The original Biblical text is based on the Hebrew Bible for the Old Testament and the Septuagint for the Deuterocanonical books and the New Testament. The Old Testament and the New Testament are read by Protestant Christians and the Catholic Christians add with them the Deuterocanonical books. Most books based on Biblical texts are secondary sources or based on secondary sources. The Bible we'll be using for the sake of convenience is the Willibrordbible, which is based on the original texts.

The Interpretation
The Bible itself represents the whole body of a continuous evolution of the faith. In earlier versions, God is a cruel and jealous being who punishes anyone who dares not to worship him (Exodus 20:5). Over time however, he evolves into a more empathetic being that judges people as harshly as they themselves are (Matthew 7:1-3). The fact that this process is continuous means that what goes in last overrides what came in first. Under that assumption we can start analyzing the belief of today this fellow man has a problem with.

The critique
The Bible uses the concept of sin. It says that all individual human beings have sinned at some point in their lives. The reason why is because everyone can't constantly pay attention to God's word. (Romans 6:7-25) The problem with this assumption is that it favors practice over intent. We could as well represent this by a perfect Christian machine that, like any good Christian, has an error mechanism in place to put back its thoughts to the Christian faith. Like any machine, a misguided electrical current can cause it to sin, which this machine resolves through prayer by the mechanism put in place. However, the problem comes in when that misguided electrical current affects the logical gates responsible for that mechanism. When another misguided electrical current comes in he will sin and will be unable to resolve it. Now imagine for a second that humans are that machine and that a being with perfect attention span judges whether or not they are able to enter heaven or cease to exist altogether (Revelation 21). The idea that some will enter hell because he forgot that he sinned is a cruel faith to tie humans to.

Conclusion
The Bible is limiting your beliefs and tells you outright that you will likely not have salvation like Jesus did because of your flawed nature. Is it morally just from the Bible to punish those who followed the teachings yet were unable to do them as well as demanded? I don't think so, as that means that for following your faith that there can be no salvation for you personally, making it worthless to try to acquire the wealth of the heavens. It's much better to acquire an understanding of the freedoms you want to have.

Further notes
Have you ever seen someone voice similar criticism? Would you like to share your thoughts on the matter? I welcome everyone to an open debate on the idea.