Thread:User talk:WaitingforGodot/Fifty Shades of BS/reply (18)

Fuck, my half-arsed attempt at writing porn was better! At least I didn't try that obscenely annoying first-person present-tense thing it did. Yeah, it is pretty insulting that overhyped fan-fiction gets published.

BUT, I suppose it's pitched just right with the BDSM stuff. It's "risque" enough because it mentions so much stuff, but never actually depicts them so it won't put people off - it's no Agony In Pink, that's for sure.