Essay talk:Sounds like Defending Trump

DA
"Apparently deviantART is a controversal subject and doesn't matter, Here I am going to discuss the Hilarity of the deviantART group SJW-Resistance." I don't think you really understand this situation. Part of our problem with the DA article is that it paints a wide swath of people (not all of whom agree with or even interact with each other) with a very broad and very negative brush. The second part is you don't debunk, you rant. You go on for ages about these comparatively minor people all the while you lose your readers in the reeds.

P.S. You misspelled "controversial". 02:15, 15 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Uh, there are much more grammatical errors in the article. 02:23, 15 September 2018 (UTC)
 * I took a timeout to write the above comment after reading the quoted sentence. 02:29, 15 September 2018 (UTC)