Draft talk:Oskar Dirlewanger

Nice
This guy deffo needs an article. I’ll work over this draft when I have time. 02:22, 5 May 2021 (UTC)

Weird tone
This sort of thing, plus the caps lock, is just weird. Christopher (talk) 17:32, 5 May 2021 (UTC)
 * hmm, the editing style seems suspicious. The editor seems oddly obsessed with the grim details, to the detriment of the articles tone Leucippus Talk 17:39, 5 May 2021 (UTC)

Sorry if the tone is a bit weird, and sorry if it looks like the focus is on the grim details. Dirlewanger and his men are mostly recorded for their atrocities, and most of the information about them do focus on the atrocities. I apologize if the tone is a bit odd though, feel free to suggest changes to remove the weirdness Naxhi24