User talk:EssenceOfThought

Hi there -- it looks like you took out some material for no real reason; also, you added a really broad and obvious statement that really broke up the flow of the article. But keep poking away, you'll figure out what works and what doesn't. Theory of Practice "...and we do love you madly." 21:25, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

Well, I saw that the source links were all at the bottom, save his own. Why should J.P go against the general placement of sources? As for the comments, they are just as valid criticisms as his own. Shouldn't we expect a higher standard of something which they propose to affect social policy? From studying Sociology that's the one thing that I've really seen. If I am wrong in expecting such standard, I apologize. I shall not question again. --EssenceOfThought (talk) 21:33, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
 * It's not a question of how valid the criticism was as a stylistic one: it was pretty blunt and obvious, and it sort of just sat there in the middle of the article. Theory of Practice "...and we do love you madly." 21:38, 28 January 2013 (UTC)