Essay talk:The functioning of society

Please criticize my essay, I welcome it. Hepatelem (talk) 04:36, 31 August 2017 (UTC)
 * OK, it lacks paragraph breaks which makes it difficult to read. This also makes it difficult to see the order in which you are presenting your ideas. --Bob"Life is short and (insert adjective)" 06:24, 31 August 2017 (UTC)


 * Better? Hepatelem (talk) 13:51, 31 August 2017 (UTC)
 * It's certainly far more readable. :-)--Bob"Life is short and (insert adjective)" 14:11, 31 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Are you for or against any of the concepts that I have laid out? Hepatelem (talk) 14:38, 31 August 2017 (UTC)