Essay talk:Needed Constitutional Amendments (Blue)

I must say: I like your essay a lot better than any of the others, mine included.

One problem I do have: when commenting on the rights of enemy combatants, you say you want to "be practical, rather than overly idealistic". Several paragraphs later, you admit your gun control amendment isn't very practical. Isn't the point of this series of essays to be idealistic, though?

Quibbling aside, your proposals are so well enumerated as to make me very embarrassed with the quality of my own essay. 04:48, 7 October 2010 (UTC)