Essay talk:So, you're a fundamentalist

You know what you mean, I know what you mean...
But the sentence, "Since you probably associate with like-minded..." would benefit from an "only" afore "with" to make sure those not in the know, (despite its title your audience is them what ain't fundies), can determine exactly where you're going with this. Hence, "Since you probably associate only with like-minded..." While it could be put earlier in the sentence it's wise to never put two words ending in "ly" together as the resultant sentence becomes overly gymnastic to read. 00:06, 16 July 2010 (UTC) C ® ackeЯ