Forum:Writers' Club

Have something you wrote yourself that you want to share? Like to mercilessly tear apart things that people spend countless hours and sweat & tears on? Well, if so, you're an ass, but you're still welcome here! Here's something I'm working on: The Colour Gray, a story about love, pirates, flying monkeys, and Islam. Just kidding -- it's about the future & shit.  Fucker  talk to me :D   21:53, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Hey, I only see the first sentence on your google doc.Rand0 (talk) 04:53, 21 March 2012 (UTC)
 * It's been a while since then, I think... Peter tanquam ex ungue leonem 04:56, 21 March 2012 (UTC)
 * (EC)Well, we kept telling them to cut the bad parts, so it's good to know they followed through on that. 04:58, 21 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Perhaps it could be re-worked as a haiku?--Bob"What can be asserted without evidence can also be dismissed without evidence." 11:49, 8 April 2012 (UTC)
 * I think it just needs the addition of "And they all lived happily ever after". Everyone loves a short story with a happy ending.  14:16, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

Surrealist Poems.
Untitled Songs, Prologue.

Lingering inside this quod

Drinking the moonlight.

Melancholy through this rain

Cries this wasted night.

Juggling under the deep still water

She breathes a dream and call it life.

Knows not she that Sun will burn

It all in moments, within with light.

Knitting out the fragments of Sun

We penned down an eternal sigh.

Longed long for this point disheartened,

Hence sense the One with senses unified.

Juggling before the cleansed doors of perception

Demiurged this set Experience personified.

Knows not He that time will burn,

Them words We wrote, within with light.


 * Demiurged, is not actually any word in English language

But, in the Platonic, Neopythagorean, Middle Platonic, and Neoplatonic schools of philosophy, the "demiurge" is an artisan-like figure responsible for the fashioning and maintenance of the physical universe.

So, I have had used the term Demiurged to represent the act of creating in the sense of demiurge.

Fanfic!
I wrote some fanfic myself, mainly a five-part series called Mass Foundations. It's mainly set in the Mass Effect universe, occasionally crossing over with other works like Fallout. It's inspired by the likes of Mass Vexations by Herr Wozzeck. As of this post, I'm writing with a like-minded co-author, 4Ferelden. So far, only two entries in the series have been released. Let me know what you guys think! :D

Mass Foundations

Redemption in the Stars (rewrite)

A New Day (prologue and three chapters so far)
 * Link to the story on Fanfiction.net

--Nord Ronnoc (talk) 10:08, 6 January 2015 (UTC)