User talk:Feredir28/Defender's Guide for Life's Toughest Questions

Revisions

Pretty good so far, but some of the content is very harsh in attacking Comfort, not even in a humorous way sometimes. Try to remove some of this...it feels like hate propaganda almost. I've done a little revising (mostly grammatical stuff), but it was otherwise a good article for the most part. I'm not trying to be rude to the author, just giving my insight....-TetraEleven (talk) 13:56, 27 June 2011 (UTC)

EDIT: I'm still fixing some of it (without trying to remove too much of the author's original work), but this article really needs to be revisited, because it just seems like straight up Conservapedia-style slander at some points, and I think we are better than that. Snark =/= hate. And I would like to add some more citations, even for the scientific fact, because it would look less biased, and more RationalWiki-ish. -TetraEleven (talk) 15:37, 27 June 2011 (UTC)