Essay talk:Election 2008: Racism in America

Do you, er, want your essay copyedited? There a re few minor typos/gaffes that could use fixing to make it clearer. Also, not actually quoting your source for the quote is a bit weaselly (funny, but weaselly nonetheless) - it sort of undermines your whole "smarter than the weasel words" attitude.

And as far as "My Rule #41 on the Rules-To-Live-My-Life-By is to recognize and point out these when ever possible." - I'd like to see all of those "rules", or was that just a snarkism? We know you are much smarter than us, so perhaps the previous 40 rules could help us become slightly more enlightened? ħuman 03:01, 6 October 2008 (EDT)