Essay talk:Macrowalking

A mixed metaphor

A mixed metaphor involving 'human hamster wheels' (see adverts via your favourite web-browser, and films on various websites) to cross the said oceans, and 'being in a bubble of their own making' is somewhere out there. Anyone care to develop it? 82.44.143.26 (talk) 15:59, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

The narrative voice

The narrative voice on here could really use some polish. Do you want your writing to be taken seriously? ^{— Unsigned, by: 104.218.66.33 / talk / contribs}