User talk:Atomictomoco/sandbox
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Japanese Article Improvements[edit]
Add it in! Looks not bad! Cømяade FυzzчCαтPøтαтø (talk/stalk) 21:37, 16 January 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you! However, wouldn't I want to seek consensus first, especially on changes that might be perceived as a Japanese person trying to downplay negative statements? Unless maybe I accdentally made the article sound harsher! (ﾟ口ﾟ; I am also not 100% certain the english is at a proper level in some sections. There are a few pieces that sound awkward since I wrote them with only a few revisions. atomic tomoco (talk) 21:59, 16 January 2015 (UTC)
- Almost all of your revisions are fine, grammatically and tonally. Generally, a talkpage consensus is only required if you wish to flip an article's viewpoint from support to rejection or vice versa. Cømяade FυzzчCαтPøтαтø (talk/stalk) 23:20, 16 January 2015 (UTC)
- I see, thank you. I will move it all in then, after a final set of reading to find any errors. atomic tomoco (talk) 23:23, 16 January 2015 (UTC)
- Almost all of your revisions are fine, grammatically and tonally. Generally, a talkpage consensus is only required if you wish to flip an article's viewpoint from support to rejection or vice versa. Cømяade FυzzчCαтPøтαтø (talk/stalk) 23:20, 16 January 2015 (UTC)