User talk:MrXrM

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Noobs who totally change the tone of an article without starting a discussion on said article's talk page usually end up disappointed. Father Vivian O'Blivion (talk) 14:15, 4 June 2014 (UTC)

+1 --larron (talk) 14:30, 4 June 2014 (UTC)

->Ok then. First of all I apologize for my big-block-modification. I found easier to edit from text editor then copy-paste, before I realised that it made impossible to monitor changes that I made.

Nevertheless I believe this article is biased and requires some editing.

• I have only removed what seemed biased and unnecessary. Adding bold in the introduction is not mandatory: everything is in the title.
• Some Bible verses are missing in giving a complete picture of what "slavery" really meant for Hebrews, without trying to justify it necessarily.
• Some modern translations are of really bad quality and "sometimes" devoid the text of its initial consistence found in older versions.

--MrXrM (talk) 16:38, 4 June 2014 (UTC)

Versions

moved to: Talk:Slavery_in_the_Bible#Versions --larron (talk) 16:56, 4 June 2014 (UTC)

Wiki editing

On talk pages, please sign your comments using four tildes (~~~~) or by clicking on the sign button: on the toolbar above the edit panel. You can also indent successive talk page comments using one more colon (:) for each line. Thank you. Placeholder (talk) 15:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)

On talk-pages, please add new comments on the bottom of a topic. Please don't change your comments after another editor has replied to them, and please, don't insert your comments into comments of others.

Of course, there may be times when these guidelines can be violated. But these times are rare.

Generally, try to make it easy for a reader to follow a discussion, and give your interlocutors a chance to find your comments!

Thanks, --larron (talk) 21:27, 5 June 2014 (UTC)