User talk:MrXrM
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Noobs who totally change the tone of an article without starting a discussion on said article's talk page usually end up disappointed. Father Vivian O'Blivion (talk) 14:15, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
->Ok then. First of all I apologize for my big-block-modification. I found easier to edit from text editor then copy-paste, before I realised that it made impossible to monitor changes that I made.
Nevertheless I believe this article is biased and requires some editing.
- I have only removed what seemed biased and unnecessary. Adding bold in the introduction is not mandatory: everything is in the title.
- Some Bible verses are missing in giving a complete picture of what "slavery" really meant for Hebrews, without trying to justify it necessarily.
- Some modern translations are of really bad quality and "sometimes" devoid the text of its initial consistence found in older versions.
--MrXrM (talk) 16:38, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
Versions[edit]
moved to: Talk:Slavery_in_the_Bible#Versions --larron (talk) 16:56, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
Wiki editing[edit]
On talk pages, please sign your comments using four tildes (~~~~) or by clicking on the sign button: 
on the toolbar above the edit panel. You can also indent successive talk page comments using one more colon (:) for each line. Thank you. Placeholder (talk) 15:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
- On talk-pages, please add new comments on the bottom of a topic. Please don't change your comments after another editor has replied to them, and please, don't insert your comments into comments of others.
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- Thanks, --larron (talk) 21:27, 5 June 2014 (UTC)