RationalWiki:Articles for demotion/Elon Musk

Elon Musk | Result: Demoted to Mars-base colonist[edit]

This article is illustrated, exhaustive, and the citations are both numerous and properly formatted. Musk's relevance to the mission is also blindingly obvious given his status as a supreme enabler of far-right politics, purveyor of bullshit, and con artist and labor rights violator extraordinare. Carthage (talk) 03:38, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
The write-fest continues to surprise us with all these improvements. I would help y’all out in the writing but I’ve got finals to study for. --Goatspeed. _{See what I'm up to}CircularR asoning^{See my experiments} 18:52, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
Arcadium Trancefer (talk) 19:59, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
I've cleaned up references. I now support demotion. Bongolian (talk) 04:24, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
Ioe bidome (talk) 20:14, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
Looks good to me. Might do some tinkering later. 🎄Chef Moosolini’s Ristorante Italiano🎄^{Ask about our holiday specials!} 21:29, 17 December 2023 (UTC)

A few of the citations could use some better formatting, but otherwise it looks good. Bongolian (talk) 05:49, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
I dunno. I think it certainly leaves something to be desired even though it does have a lot of good. The article isn't "messy" per se, but there's something about it that makes it almost feel like it is — one thing is perhaps that fact that the Twitter section might be too verbose (that is, it could be better summarized, given more brevity without too much loss of content — similar incidents might be clumped together into the same paragraph or sentence). I wouldn't find a demote to silver to be controversial, but I'm not sure about voting for it myself. Chillpilled (talk) 14:36, 9 December 2023 (UTC)